KIMA
I-Arrival
II-Instructions
III-Senzala
IV-Shebeh
V-Fields
VI-River
VII-Casa grande
VIII-Games
IX-Bonfire
X-Alebrije
Wednesday 9 July 2008
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The fantastic dreams of a fool
Welcome!
Thank you for visiting my journal of musings. I hope you enjoy your stay.
The blind assassin
Renegade's magic
1 comment:
Hi Nittai,
thanks for Kima's story. I really enjoyed reading it, i really liked the detail of her perceptions, & the pace & flashbacks of the earlier sections. And the physicality of her emotions (especially when her dad dies) Especially liked the image of the spaces between things gettig bigger at night... I was thinking also that maybe one needs to be careful with the words "overseeer" (how do you spell it??) and especially "slave" when it comes from her perspective. Are you planning to expand later sections (would like to read more!)?
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